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Now soon I'll be in relapse,
I'll be wishing she were here,
I would linger on her every word,
As if liquid sipped through my ear.
Yet this poem only shows,
My mind has yet still failed,
My body always longs for her,
She is what my thoughts entail.
So I repeat it's for the best,
that she leaves me be,
Sitting in this empty room,
Trademarked silent misery.
Always playing my worst enemy,
The antagonist which makes me whole,
I shall strive for her attention,
My emotions will take their toll.
I'll be wishing she were here,
I would linger on her every word,
As if liquid sipped through my ear.
Yet this poem only shows,
My mind has yet still failed,
My body always longs for her,
She is what my thoughts entail.
So I repeat it's for the best,
that she leaves me be,
Sitting in this empty room,
Trademarked silent misery.
Always playing my worst enemy,
The antagonist which makes me whole,
I shall strive for her attention,
My emotions will take their toll.
I'm usually not a fan of writing in first poem, it was an attempt. I feel like the last stanza isn't a fitting ending, in fact I feel the second to last stanza does it much better and I might reverse them, but the last stanza is necessary to emphasize how I can't stop thinking about whatever girl I'm obsessing about at a given time, and how I want to ignore myself but a major part of me wants to go be with her. Re-reading this I feel like it's shit, I may delete it.
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